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Three Cornered Hat (Double Etheree)

THREE CORNERED HAT (double Ethereee) This Being A human All the contrast? From Saint to Devil? I fight it every day Think about it in my sleep Awake to such good intentions Before noon I have changed my colors I must go along with the middle ground Wavering wavering between Love and________ I dare not think the alternative Yet in consciousness it does rest Listen to the Still Small Voice Always urging guiding “LOVE – the only TRUTH” Seek inner peace” OH! BE STILL! LIVE NOW! LIFE!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2010 9:36:00 AM

honestly this one ran right through me, i can feel the honesty as a man you live with no regrets, you are just trying to get by all the good and bad contrast life brings us . well done on your conscious, over power it,..p.d.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2010 5:52:00 AM

Great write....Love the last five lines...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...The poem "Writing Me Softly With His Rhyme" was written to the music "Killing Me Softly With His Song"...I heard it that morning as an instrumental and the write just came to me...Glad that you liked...Sara

Kim M

Date: 4/20/2010 8:43:00 AM

This poem brings to mind the picture of the angel and devil on each shoulder, with your head in the middle. Both beings talking at the same time. Although you've stuffed cotton in the devil's hear, he seems to be using a megaphone, like a cheerleader chanting. "Daver, Daver, he's my man ..." Can be chaotic at times. Enjoyed this reflection. (Also, thank you for supporting me in my poem.)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/20/2010 7:31:00 AM

A fine Etheree

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/19/2010 10:12:00 PM

First of all, WHO says we are ALL rooted in rationality/ hahaha. I meet lots who are not. Ahhh, I think I can relate to what you are saying in this double etheree. What made you like this form so well, just like I love it!! Good one! LUv, andrea

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/19/2010 2:42:00 PM

enjoyed--thanks for your comments-hope you liked my suspenseful write.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/19/2010 7:12:00 AM

It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Daver. Thank you for sharing your writing. Thank you for your ever kind comments. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/19/2010 6:14:00 AM

Interesting perspective on the battle waged within the soul. Insightful write, Daver. Best wishes, Carolyn