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After Stephanie Deshpande's Assembling the Pieces

Don't find contemporary free rhyme as a choice of forms--interior rhymes for me are

leg, egg, edge, nutmeg, wile, pile, idle, while, 'est words 

We don’t so much as beg, “Mom can I?” no, just stand idle, lean on one leg, pick up and set down pieces with the care of an egg the quietest until we know it fits into the slowly growing frame, and sneak , click it in, every once in a while or we seek out edges, set them in a pile sort by color and sort by texture until “would you please bring me?” from a parent sends us off after we bring mugs of Tom & Jerry’s with a dash of nutmeg, or plates of cookies back the fastest we find a reason to sit, no one says anything this is our one large family present, one thousand pieces spread across our table we are entitled such are our wiles unnoticed we fit in to the family picture, puzzle hour after hour until the day or hour or errand came and we steal away and see who could hold out longest hiding the piece that fits into the thousand pieces last or is forever lost

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Date: 3/16/2014 8:31:00 AM
The layout so fits the theme of an unfinished jigsaw puzzle! Loved it!
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Date: 2/24/2014 10:26:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem Sheri hate a missing piece lol ty for my place in your contest and for running it hugs
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/1/2014 7:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Shadow, appreciate it
Date: 1/23/2014 6:15:00 AM
Enjoyed your creativity so much Sheri. Very deep poem expressed so well. I enjoyed the lay out of the words as it added to the tone and feeling of each group. Take care.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 1/23/2014 3:04:00 PM
Thanks so much Vincent
Date: 1/21/2014 8:04:00 AM
A fantastic family puzzle poem! Yor rhyme scheme is extraordinary! Warmest hapy new yr n thanx so much 4 d wn.
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Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 1/23/2014 3:04:00 PM
Happy New Year to you too, S.zaynub

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