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Thoughts That Matter Grow

Somewhere between the molecules and neurons in my brain, lies latent creativity, between miracles and mundane. Although of late, still sleeping, wandering, adrift, as if in need like watering seeds to bloom its innate gift. Itself to heights out of the night and into light again, somewhere behind the prefrontal lobe a thought begins to spin. Like a waterspout, a funnel cloud, or a black hole in deep space, yet smaller than a pinhead with angels dancing on its face. While it craves to know its master and begs to be reborn, as if it knows it's time and place, and laughs with mirth and scorn. Much like a clown, a trickster now, hiding in the weeds, lying, between my amygdala and medulla, creativity teases me. I know not where it's leading, if any place at all, but only know to listen, to its faint, quiescent call. That may lead to greener pastures where wisdom's waiting there, some little treasures I've been after or perhaps, disaster and despair. The only way of knowing is to take the winding road, inside my mind where love is kind and thoughts that matter grow. While listening to the wind and rain or gazing on the Milky Way, creativity unfolds like silver and gold, and children lost in play. As it rises, falls, expands, and stalls, leaving all perplexed, waiting for the moment when another young bird leaves its nest. And spreads its wings and learns to fly and let itself be known, to feathery flocks, sea, sky, and rocks and wherever it may roam. In this never-ending, mind-bending journey of mountain peaks to climb, for the creative urge to feel the surge of Creativity in our minds.

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Date: 9/15/2023 11:44:00 PM
This is a wonderful poem Terrell. So, so well written. Very poetic and creative. Many great lines, ‘Itself to heights out of the night’ ‘ Creatively unfolds like silver and gold’. Splendid. As Sotto says, the ending stanza encapsulates the whole poem. Really enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing. Warmest wishes to you.
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Date: 8/18/2023 4:39:00 PM
Terrell, your poem has been exquisitely articulated. I particularly admire the concluding paragraph, as it impeccably encapsulates the essence of the poem. Your artistic prowess shines through, showcasing your creative mind in this remarkable piece of poetry.
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Date: 8/19/2023 1:24:00 PM
Sotto, thx for your kind thoughts on a poem I wrote several weeks ago when I was actually feeling creative. Lately, however, I've been focusing on health & exercise, trying to drop a few unwanted pounds, etc. so writing is temporarily on the "back burner." Thx for understanding & all the best, Terrell
Date: 8/16/2023 4:31:00 AM
Love the Title it drew me in….poem so beautifully stated Terrell….loved the last paragraph especially it summed the poem up perfectly! Debx
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Date: 7/22/2023 3:48:00 PM
I agree with the title, Terrell. There is a nice smooth flow and rhyum to your poem that sooth me as I read and agreed with each line. I like the way that mind of your expresses the thoughts created there. Very enjoyable read, my friend. Write On! Bill
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Date: 7/20/2023 12:40:00 PM
You show your creative mind indeed here with this poetry, Terrell. Thanks for your lovely comment on my poem the other day.
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Date: 7/20/2023 1:06:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by, Andrea. As always, both your poetry and your review of my own mean the world to me. PS: I made slight revision since you read this earlier. A few words changes if you care to take another peek. If not, no worries & no flurries! Cheerios, Terrell
Date: 7/20/2023 12:35:00 PM
beautifully expressed, Terrell!
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Date: 7/20/2023 1:08:00 PM
Thank you, Ilene, your two-word expression says all that needs to be said to make my day better than the best! Cheerios, Terrell

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