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Thoughts On a Rainy Morning

The fury of the rain Was unleashed on the pane Though the glass and water looked same They tried to each other tame The glass was cold or calm Was the question causing the qualm? The rain, did it stand for anger Or was it trying to soften this stranger? Both for a while stood unrelenting Till a hand threw open the windows Letting the glass, to fury condense And turn misty under the rain’s touch intense

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Date: 4/3/2017 1:44:00 PM
and the tiny rivulets of rain that from the windows fell till no drops were left, and the window pane waited for the next
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Date: 6/15/2011 12:36:00 AM
Nice one... about rain again..on which i find myself writing very often.thanks.
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Sharmila Menon
Date: 7/4/2011 9:31:00 PM
kerala looks most beautiful during rains. who can escape from the charm :)
Date: 6/14/2011 3:09:00 AM
Enjoyed the read, keep your poetic pen flowing. http://www.amazon.com/dp/B0052U4O5U
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Sharmila Menon
Date: 7/4/2011 9:32:00 PM
Thank u anthony for leaving the words of encouragement :)

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