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Thoughts of You

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Thoughts of you accost my mind leave me trembling, naked, blind to all else except your face and those lips I long to trace thoughts of you accost my heart and the beats go off the chart all the surge of passion pounds and my wanting need expounds Thoughts of you accost my soul baring not part, but the whole every dream thus naked lies in the gaze of wanting eyes thoughts of you accost my thighs make my breath escape in sighs each one makes love to my core and I beg for more and more thoughts of you accost my time turn the mundane to sublime turn the dreary into fine thoughts of you: my sweetest rhyme Eileen Manassian

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2015 9:03:00 AM

You certainly were inspired and the Rhymes flowed like an anointing oil.

Richard D Seal

Date: 7/1/2015 7:48:00 PM

You certainly do a lot of thinking my little Desert Orchid, mind you, can't say they bad thoughts lol, btw, when are you ever mundane lol. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/2/2015 1:27:00 PM

Yes, Mr Seal. I can't seem to get this little brain of mine to quit thinking. Thank you for your visit to my poem. It's good to see you around again.

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/1/2015 8:55:00 AM

Lovely, passionate write, as expected from you, Eileen. You certainly accost the reader's senses! hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/2/2015 1:30:00 PM

Thank you, Richard. I'm very grateful for your visit and kind words. blessings.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/1/2015 1:00:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Good of you to visit. Hope all is well.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/1/2015 7:28:00 AM

I enjoy drinking at the fountain of your words. You made excellent use of the form and left us all sated.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 6/30/2015 10:37:00 PM

Wow my sweet Eileen.. turning the mundane to sublime...love ur write dear! u never fail to awe with ur powerful emotive words!!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/30/2015 8:03:00 PM

This poem is divine! It is going straight into my fave's Eileen! 7

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2015 9:41:00 PM

Thanks, my dear Connie. That is a great compliment. I love it when my work is treasured. Hugs to you.

Edward Snyder

Date: 6/30/2015 4:53:00 PM

My oh my so very well done, your rhymes very too sweet

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/30/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thank you, Edward. I'm glad that you liked this piece.