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Thoughts of New York

The ashes and the dust fall like snowflakes to the ground They seem to drift down gently not knowing where they're bound I think of all those souls scattered in all the debris In the ashes of destruction, their souls are finally free. I think of people jumping like from the pan into the fire People hand in hand, consumed by their desire Just a few seconds, until it all will end The thoughts that they had of making that final descend. All those tiny pieces of what is left of a dream The terror in their eyes as they faced the final scene The dust that settles down are their scattered souls Seeping into cracks, falling into holes. I wonder of life as the cloud of death surrounds Their voices all are silent, yet their spirit's still around. I wonder where the dream turned into a nightmare As I look at the destruction, of the future I am scared. Where once workers built they see nothing but destruction, They cut through twisted wreckage, what's left of their construction. I think of all the people that had to live through this hell Then I hope we learn some lesson, I hope we learn it well. There needs to be understanding that we're all not the same We need to find the answer, instead of assigning blame. I think of all those heroes, there were so many. As they look for survivors, hoping to find any. I wonder of the future what will all this bring I think of those lost souls as the bell begins to ring. People join together I hope we find a way? We need to remember yesterday, as we rebuild today.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/21/2012 4:41:00 AM
I was very touched by this. thank you forK9D6 a great wrtie!
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Date: 7/18/2012 8:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Mark. Love, Carol
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Mark Russell
Date: 7/18/2012 7:30:00 PM
Hi Carol hope you are well. I didn't even know just got home build a tree season porch on Cape cod the last four days. It was pretty large 29ft by 18ft mahogany decking roofed and screened in a still have alittle more to do. It came out really good:) It's kind of cool this is a 9/11 poem I wrote some time ago it would be cool if it did well I lost a couple of riends in the towers this one is for them, Take care and thanks for the support......Mark

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