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The more I know The sadder I grow ****** The woman: in the name of love I’m going to rip your skin off! The man: in the name of love My money is not enough! ****** Sorry, miss, I have traded our love story For my personal glory! ****** They said: you should be optimistic You should try I replied: indeed! This world can be better When pigs fly! ****** Look, miss, I appreciate your charm and lure But if you want me to love you, you have to implore! ****** I love her because she is pretty But why would she love me? Out of pity?! ****** I want us to be in love, but not to fall I want us to bloom together and soar ****** They are down on the ground…… Envy him, but holding hands When he is on top, better than them…… But alone he stands ****** There is no flower without a thorn But still flowers aren’t forlorn! ****** Things fall fast if they have big weight But one can fall even faster, if he has a mate!

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Date: 7/6/2015 8:05:00 AM
Mohammed, you have penned many great words within this creative write, I love what you wrote in your comment on my senryu 13, "poetry needs suffering " I just may have to steal that phrase and thanks for visiting
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 7/7/2015 4:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by, and you're right but i don't know whether poetry is written despite of suffering or because of suffering!,we seem to like it and the suffering anyway!
Date: 6/21/2015 7:09:00 AM
Wow a very unique creative extraordinary poem and many lines made me giggle n smile. To want to be in love but not to fall, yay. And the pigs fly line lol. Nicely imaginative yet many lines true about life n love. Kudos. Wonder if I have read u before? Pls do review my latest poem too.
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Mohamed Adel
Date: 6/21/2015 1:20:00 PM
Thank you,Zaynub, so much for commenting and pointing out such clever observations,glad you liked it :)

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