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Restless air, restless ground. No silence or solitude to be found. Sounds that echo, sounds that last. Seeking refuge and longing for the past. Lack of companionship, lack of emotions. A need for the warm sun and soft affections. Bright eyes, yet impaired vision. Need confidence to make this final decision. Focused ambition, focused relation. Hope that my find will exceed expectations. Random kindness, random deeds. Giving way to first fill other’s needs. Living alone, living secure. No pain, but thoughts to endure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/19/2010 3:58:00 AM
Great expectations, and the willingness to never give up - Regards Wilma
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Date: 5/18/2010 6:07:00 AM
Wow dit is my fave een, cool en dankie dat jy vir my die website gegee het, ekt ook goed gepost
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Date: 5/13/2010 10:59:00 AM
Beautiful musical quality and flow, great read well done. Regards Heidie (Bly jy het aangesluit, sien uit daarna om meer van jou te lees)
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Date: 5/13/2010 4:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Francois. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/12/2010 6:35:00 AM
well done, my kinda read, enjoyed the deep words being used to express a sadden burden,..p.d.
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Date: 5/12/2010 6:32:00 AM
Well written... life does get better..
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