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This invisible being has come alive inside my mind She roams freely thoughts and me entwined Tossing and turning she puts me into a bind Looking for things that she can find I’ll give her this, she’s behind my poetry, this mastermind She refuses to lift a finger And often springs to mind And at times she’s certainly not too kind She has feelings which she often ties around my neck like a noose And takes offence, if I don’t think And sulks when I refuse I dare not falter, she has a short fuse! 6.6.2021 Sponsor: Kai Michael Neumann Contest: The poet’s hands are tied

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Date: 6/6/2021 3:45:00 PM
Hello Carol Mitra, it sounds like a battle to do what is right to do. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2021 10:10:00 AM
Hello Carol Mitra, I hop all is well. enjoy your day my friend.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/6/2021 7:29:00 PM
Thanks dear Darlene....much love :)
Date: 6/6/2021 10:46:00 AM
Fascinating, delightful piece, Carol:-) I'm sure it will do pretty well in Kai's contest!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/6/2021 7:28:00 PM
Thank you dear Edward....I hope so too :)
Date: 6/6/2021 12:03:00 AM
A thoughtful verse on thoughts that has a solid narrative
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Carol Mitra
Date: 6/6/2021 1:16:00 AM
Thank you Aniruddha....I am glad you thought so :)

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