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my thoughts of you 
are petals
floating slowly in the wind
coming to rest 
on reality`s cold hard waters
desiring only the bud from whence they came

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  1. Date: 9/25/2008 11:24:00 PM
    lovely piece and definately thoughtful!!!

  1. Date: 9/21/2008 12:34:00 AM
    Lovely images. Must say that the thoughts are very beautiful. Love Chitra

  1. Date: 9/19/2008 1:30:00 PM
    Much said in this concise poem. Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen