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Thoughts

my thoughts of you are petals floating slowly in the wind coming to rest on reality`s cold hard waters desiring only the bud from whence they came

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/25/2008 11:24:00 PM
lovely piece and definately thoughtful!!!
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Date: 9/21/2008 12:34:00 AM
Lovely images. Must say that the thoughts are very beautiful. Love Chitra
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Date: 9/19/2008 1:30:00 PM
Much said in this concise poem. Nice use of imagery to forward your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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