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Thought Police

I'm afraid So afraid Of being arrested By the thought police Their rules are many Think this Think that Don't diverge from the normal Stop playing on the street corner of tomorrow Let sleeping dogs rest Do not question Do not burn on passionate bonfires I watch as they ready their weapons They display arresting warrants through clouded glass Fifty shades of bland Cuffs dangling from bulging belts Bound in self rightous blunder They wait outside my door Screaming bull horns command me to exit my paper freedom I am blinded by search lights, forced to use my third eye Fearful of their uniformed presence How long will they be held at bay? I hold their preconceptions hostage They cannot see beyond their script Trained in the warfare of ignorance They say "who are you, to question our authority?" I answer "I am the poet The one who dreams beyond here and now My words push through yesterday like a plow! Yet I am gentle like the rain Equal parts of pleasure and pain A powerful detergent I remove ancient stains With my words I shake the ground I will not be stopped by another's sound Arrest me, yet you can't stop what I think Within my mind I determine what I drink." The thought police Turn to another The writings of our sisters and brothers They wait, with cuffs in hand Unable to understand The few The many Who have joined hands The poets The thinkers We take a stand Inspired by Eileen Ghali's poem "The Hidden Woman" Catie Lindsay's Heart of the matter contest.

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Date: 2/16/2014 5:58:00 PM
Many writers have been imprisoned over the years for saying/writing what they think. Strange how authority doesn't like to be questioned ain't it lol. Great write Rick, carry on shaking the ground. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2014 7:35:00 PM
So nice having you back Richard. Thanks for this thoughtful visit.
Date: 2/16/2014 5:17:00 PM
I love it... Very well written... Verlena
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2014 7:36:00 PM
Thanks Verlena.
Date: 2/16/2014 1:56:00 PM
An incredible poem. Seeing work like this makes me aspire to be a better writer. Am new to the site and am learning so much with every poem i see. Jan x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/16/2014 2:24:00 PM
You are very Kind, I will check out your work.
Date: 2/12/2014 3:41:00 PM
The imagery is very good. I like the description of the thought police. Well written. Best wishes Linda
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/13/2014 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Linda
Date: 2/11/2014 8:27:00 AM
A great write and congrats on the win, richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2014 10:16:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Ram.
Date: 2/11/2014 1:15:00 AM
Congrats Richard for a win well deserved
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/11/2014 6:13:00 AM
Thanks Kayod5
Date: 2/10/2014 6:13:00 PM
This is just fantastic for me, Richard. Congratulations on the worthy win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2014 6:35:00 PM
Thanks Michael.
Date: 2/10/2014 10:19:00 AM
Way to go with this awesome winner..Sara
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2014 6:34:00 PM
Thanks Sara.
Date: 2/10/2014 4:18:00 AM
What a thought, 'thought police' wow i'd be locked up lol congratulations Richard xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/10/2014 9:59:00 AM
Ha ha, me as well!
Date: 2/9/2014 10:18:00 PM
You did a nice job on this verse, Sir Richard! Glad seeing it on top. Big congrats on your deserving victory!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2014 10:38:00 PM
Thanks AO
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2014 10:37:00 PM
Date: 2/9/2014 9:39:00 PM
Congratulations, Richard on your win and on this terrific piece. This is inspired inspiration indeed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2014 10:37:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 2/9/2014 7:39:00 PM
What an ingenuous poem of introspection!! And inspired by one of the best!! Congratulations, Richard!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2014 8:22:00 PM
Yes I agree, she is one of the best. Thanks Carrie.
Date: 2/9/2014 7:26:00 PM
hey hey hey, look who is tops in this winner circle. WAY to GO, Richard.Congrats for your win.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2014 8:24:00 PM
Hi Andrea, thanks so much.
Date: 2/9/2014 7:11:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/9/2014 8:25:00 PM
Thanks again Joseph.
Date: 2/5/2014 1:52:00 PM
WOW Richard.... this is Epic... I feel this down to my bones and I agree 100 percent !! So much power in this piece . "I am the poet The one who dreams beyond here and now My words push through yesterday like a plow! Yet I am gentle like the rain Equal parts of pleasure and pain INDEED !
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/5/2014 2:17:00 PM
Thanks Debbie, I'm pleased you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 1/31/2014 10:21:00 PM
This is simply a masterpiece, I will certainly show this one to a few friends here, as in Quebec, this is becoming a sad reality! Very GREAT write!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 2/1/2014 12:36:00 AM
Sorry to hear that. I think to a certain extent that is somewhat true everywhere. I think overall we are still pretty fortunate to live in this country.
Date: 1/27/2014 11:06:00 AM
Reminiscent of 1984, "Winston", oh, sorry, I mean, "RL"...Hahahahahaha...LOL! Great piece!...enjoyed very much. Robert :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/27/2014 12:05:00 PM
You make me smile Robert.
Date: 1/26/2014 9:38:00 PM
Richard....I have no words to thank you for including that footnote at the bottom of your poem. This poem.....Is a masterpiece. I'm NOT flattering you. I'm being as honest as I can be. It is an amazing poem...I'm so so honored that my words spoke to you in some way and on some level. Thanks.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/26/2014 11:10:00 PM
I really appreciate you saying that Eileen. Their are certain pieces I write that I feel attached to and this is one of those poems.
Date: 1/24/2014 8:01:00 AM
Powerful! Stunning! Fantastic! "My words push through yesterday like a plow" Now that is the power of words.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/24/2014 8:18:00 AM
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Date: 1/23/2014 1:00:00 AM
Color me stunned!!!! This is one of the most powerful poems I've ever had the pleasure of reading. So glad you said what so many hearts FEEL. Never stop being the voice of "TRUTH"
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/23/2014 7:46:00 AM
Sarai, what a great comment, you have me smiling this morning! Thanks so much, that really makes my day.
Date: 1/21/2014 10:10:00 PM
My fav words in here are "they can not see beyond their script", so well said. A great angry piece of poetry, thanks for the read.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2014 11:38:00 PM
Thanks Scott
Date: 1/21/2014 3:35:00 PM
This is very good. It is outstanding and I enjoyed it very much.... Lucilla
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2014 11:38:00 PM
Thanks Lucilla, good night.
Date: 1/21/2014 7:40:00 AM
Yes Richard! actually, more journalists are being detained in USA than at any time in history...thank you for stopping by my poem! as to yer ?....similar subject as above! 'cept mine's about the secret meetings of the globalist plutocrats that plot the middle-class impending slavery.....ya just couldn't decipher my poem, cuz i write pretty (well, mostly totally!) abstract! jimbo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2014 7:54:00 AM
Good morning Jimbo, thanks for reading mine as well.
Date: 1/21/2014 6:19:00 AM
WOW!!!! I love the 2nd last stanza "Im apoet, the one who dreams beyond here and now...."...WOW this is a master piece Richard. Let me carry on reading some more. WOW!!!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2014 7:55:00 AM
Hi Herzel, I'm pleased you like it. Welcome to my mind.
Date: 1/21/2014 12:21:00 AM
HOLY MOTHER OF GAWD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YES, YES, DAMN YES! This is almost a Slam piece. Insatiably powerful! I dare somebody to try and change how & what I think...they will be so, so friggin' sorry! I kneel in reverence to the exuberant ferocity of your message here. This is your best ever. Don't. Ever. Stop.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/21/2014 7:57:00 AM
Now this comment makes my day Drake. Smilin ear to ear!
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