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deeper thought and bitter pill, sanctioned for the whipporwill, but life is just the puzzle sought, where hearts a pinned butterfly is caught,... oh anguished heart be still, soul seeker wants its fill, poor butterfly is caught, just life's sweet bitter pill, when naut is sometimes ought, until....Don re:"The Same" Drake Eszes

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Date: 9/27/2013 3:50:00 AM
Hi Don-- I really enjoyed this read. I love the way you use comparatives in such a clever manner. Butterfly analogy is the perfect muse. Well done.
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