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My head is spinning fast, as I am tumbling down. Troubles are coming fast, as I try to choke them down. Suffocate on the distortion. In my mind's eye, misery abides. In my charred, beatless heart, your words emphasize lost hope. My fear and your faith... undeniable friendship... my solitaire release.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 7/10/2016 11:21:00 PM
charlotte jordan, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. always **SKAT**
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Date: 11/11/2008 6:31:00 AM
Such emotion is in this write, I love the way your feelings are exposed to the reader, Always, Christy
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Date: 11/10/2008 8:23:00 PM
gripping and sad but excellent in conveying.Michael Torres
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