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Thou Art Face Book Face Book thou art mean to me will you be my undoing? From my public bursts of anger to my public boo hoo hooing. Opinions that I once confessed like I like dogs, not cats. Or how I hate republicans and I hate democrats. Sometimes getting full of me in my boxer underwear. As I sit here in judgment not shaved with uncombed hair. Sitting here behind my screen not believing what I see! Reading posts from some unknown. Did they mean that for me? How dare they think they know me as a lump forms in my throat. After all! The things they know are only what I wrote! Woe is me cruel face book it seems I cannot win. I get set free from drama and then I'm right back in. Betty tossed her salad Bobby told some lies. Jerry needs a bath real bad before he starts drawing flies. Emma left her lover Tom found somebody new. I saw a home made movie. It looked a lot like you!. Edwin C Hofert

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Date: 5/18/2015 10:31:00 AM
Hahaha... I love it my husband love it. I tend to ignore all the drama or tell them your life needs to stay private not out there for all the world to see or it is going to nip you on the butt... hugs you gutsy person
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/21/2015 1:11:00 PM
:) Thank you Eve! We all slip up once in awhile. Perfectly imperfect! God bless! Ed
Date: 5/18/2015 9:41:00 AM
Your word choices are delicious and imaginative. A good fun piece and surprisingly enough you do get to learn more about Facebook and its pitfalls. Emile. #7
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/18/2015 9:56:00 AM
LOL ain't that the truth! LOL Have a great day.
Date: 5/18/2015 9:20:00 AM
Great fun poem. Loved reading this. Next topic: twitter.....7
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/18/2015 9:57:00 AM
Hmmm. Do I hear a challenge LOL God bless. Ed
Date: 5/18/2015 9:12:00 AM
I think it's a HOOT ...but you better watch it Buster! Staunch Democrat here!
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Edwin Hofert
Date: 5/18/2015 9:56:00 AM
LOL Just joking. I am too.

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