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Join Or be conformed The ideas that fuel our thoughts are like a cinema flick Carefully crafted by those who hold influence Strategic Confining Education is a production line Miss a step and one’s left behind First comes primary, then secondary school Or rather inspection Then they are hastily shipped out to sea Where the menacing waves batter them to their knees They begin to buckle, blend and amend Whereas they now need to stand out and be different After years of being used to conform They feel like they are being reborn Those who don’t join end satisfied Always kept true to who they are Knowing exactly where to set their bar And continuously towards that, they stride

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Date: 6/12/2016 10:56:00 PM
Bhav,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:25:00 PM
- Poetry: Music in words .... rhythmic expression of emotion, like the nectar of the bee, you are sharing here with us Bhav :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/8/2016 12:25:00 AM
BHAV, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**
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Date: 6/7/2016 7:10:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Bhav. :)
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Date: 6/7/2016 5:00:00 AM
WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP.... wish you a fascinating journey.. and well written..
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