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Those Were the Moments

Those were the moments Serene white clouds ... that you are hiding behind, Take me, take me with you.. Stars that twinkle and shimmering lights, Are sweet remembrance of you... Dark was that night your lips kissed mine, and skies that went blue .... Blazing moments of passion that set us blaze, Tears of parting I wonder melted only few..... My heart that beats fast your shadow I long to see.. Desires pretend a smile Take me, take me with you.. I can't live here furthermore If it's not with you .... Ah the sweet remembrance and beats rhyming in you ... Take me, take me with you.. For how can I live, For how do I live, For why should I live, Ah those eternal moments That sweet remembrance of you .... Those missed beats as my soul craves... Quench the thirst and embrace those shapes. Help me die, take my spirit, Ah the sweet memories, Those were the moments, Those were the moments... Written for "Sweet remembrance of you poetry contest" by Craig Cornish Awarded HM Entered into "One of your best" poetry contest by rob carmack Awarded 11th place win

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Date: 1/13/2016 11:14:00 PM
DR UPMA, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/8/2016 7:43:00 PM
Dr Upma, CONGRATS on your Awesome win.... SKAT
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Date: 1/8/2016 5:30:00 AM
An Excellent write Dr Upma, congrats on your win. From Jean
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Date: 1/7/2016 10:52:00 AM
I really love this Dr. Upma..very beautiful "Those missed beats as my soul craves... Quench the thirst and embrace those shapes. Help me die, take my spirit, Ah the sweet memories, Those were the moments, Those were the moments..." Best stanza wrapping it up at the end...*smiles*
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Date: 12/18/2015 9:58:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congrats.... LINDA
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/19/2015 4:28:00 AM
Thnx for ur kind visit dear Linda!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/18/2015 10:34:00 PM
Thnx for ur kind visit dear Linda!
Date: 12/18/2015 6:11:00 AM
Dr. Sharma congratulations again on your win!!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/18/2015 9:57:00 PM
Appreciate ur kind support Michael! Than a lot for being dere!
Date: 12/17/2015 4:48:00 PM
Dr Upma, congrats. SKAT
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/18/2015 10:00:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend Skat! Sorry it landed up with Michael!
Date: 12/16/2015 6:55:00 PM
A super write my friend! Solid 7 and a great entry in that contest. Goooooooooooooooo d luck..
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/18/2015 9:59:00 PM
Thanks my dear dear friend Robert! So glad u liked this one!
Date: 12/16/2015 6:43:00 PM
this looks like you did a very nice job of it. I have not even heard the song but I sure hope he likes what you did here
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 12/18/2015 10:01:00 PM
Thanks dear Andrea for ur ever continued support n wishes!

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