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Those Thoughts

Nightmares, shame, and despair You don't go anywhere All alone in your mind even with someone by your side. You can't seem to get rid of the pain and in your heart an eternal rain. No one really knows how you feel and you have friends that always ask, "What the deal?" They're like cobwebs in your mind that you can't seem to bind. The hurt is always there which has always been your fear. The "fear" is what's wrong and you must discover another heart song. If you don't give it to Him so you can thrive you will plummet to the depths and never survive.

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Date: 4/12/2009 6:00:00 PM
this is a wonderfully written piece...my favorite line is "and in your heart an eternal rain."..well done...~Luke
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Date: 9/28/2008 9:12:00 PM
I understand what you mean! Even the cobwebs (of despair?). Indeed, HE is the only true beacon! A real nice Christian poetry!
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