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Those Stringy Banana Thingys

When peeling a banana, do those stringy things annoy What purpose do they serve except to kill our joy Sometimes feel like a primate Swinging through the foliage I migrate But those stringys sure don't interfere with my ability to enjoy

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Tim Smith

Date: 11/3/2016 1:08:00 PM

If ya peel your nanas upside down...them stringies wont bring a frown...you'd smile ear to ear...as that fruitie disappeared...leaving more time to scope the girlies in town

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/4/2016 7:11:00 AM

2124!!!! LOL Really don't think any of us will still be here!!! Wait a minute, I'll probably still be around scoping the girlies at the mall!!!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/3/2016 8:08:00 AM

Blissfully we swing through the trees//minding our Q's and our pees//holler'n AAAAhEEEAAAhEEEO!//(like Tarzan the ape man, you know//and spread through the earth like disease. More coffee!!! SWING ON JACKSON!!! How about them cubbies? ~ jj

Tim Smith
Date: 11/3/2016 1:10:00 PM

2124 we'll be singing again

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2016 8:16:00 AM

You is on your game today Mr. John John!!! YEE HAW! Cubbies reign... WHUP WHUP! Only took 108 years!!!! GOOD MORNING JOHN JOHN!!!

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 11/3/2016 8:01:00 AM

I think they're banana dental floss? Like your poem Jack!:)

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/3/2016 8:11:00 AM

GREAT!!! Never thought of that! lol Thanks dear Cheryl... love, Jack xxx

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 11/3/2016 8:09:00 AM

:-)