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those red lips

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ruby red lips kiss the watery sapphire depths upon hot summer morning sky's obsidian recesses and below shadowy depths inky puzzle awaits light creatures come to life when those lips offer kisses comforting red lips

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Jaymee Thomas

Date: 12/9/2023 8:57:00 AM

This is beautifully rendered. Your word choices are so smooth when spoken and I cannot get over how well that reflects the look and feel of the image itself. Incredibly well done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/9/2023 12:46:00 PM

Thank you, Jaymee, for the well done. I appreciate the visit. Sara K

Suzette Richards

Date: 12/6/2023 3:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement, Sara :) If you would like to have a copy of the tables as mentioned on the contest page, please soup mail me with your email address details. Thank you for your ongoing support of my contest. Regards, Suzette x

Suzette Richards
Date: 12/7/2023 6:47:00 AM

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/7/2023 6:38:00 AM

Thank you for letting me know that I should have left the comma out. I did not think it would make sense without it. Sara K

Suzette Richards
Date: 12/6/2023 11:54:00 AM

The 5th line still has a comma in it. By rights, Suzette Prime has no punctuation. Keep well, Suzette

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/6/2023 4:03:00 AM

Suzette, thank you for letting me know I placed in your contest and the smiley face. I will soupmail you. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2023 12:24:00 PM

ooh i posted about lips today also... and Maria Williams send me a poem of hers called ruby red lips also.. must be a lips day or something lol... I do not know this form so cannot comment on it.. but it seems like you have chosen a good selection of words for it..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2023 2:11:00 PM

Thank you, SO. I was using prime numbers that is all. LOL. Yes, I think several people have used the same topic. It will be an interesting contest. I don't think mine is done correctly so maybe there won't be any reason to think mine will place. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 11/30/2023 8:30:00 PM

What a seamless take on this picture. I absolutely love it; your word choices and also especially the line “ sky's obsidian recesses, and below shadowy depths inky puzzle awaits light“ profound and deep! Goodluck in the contest. Love it

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2023 3:28:00 AM

Thank you, IE. Well, I am not expecting it to do anything in the contest, but it was a challenge to try. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/30/2023 6:43:00 PM

A wonderful write/picture. I enjoyed it... Have a blessed day.................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2023 3:27:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. I appreciate the time spent reading and commenting. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/30/2023 4:44:00 PM

a well constructed Suzette Prime. You've inspired me to try my hand at this form. Great images...especially liked 'inky puzzle awaits light.' Wishing you a splendid evening, hugs, Sara B

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/1/2023 3:26:00 AM

Thank you, Sara B. The night was nice and it is still upon us awaiting the red lips to rise. Sara K