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Those Lips

Those lips, enticing, soft and warm Hidden, in part, by your mustache tickling my neck and ear as you softly kiss and tease Those lips, pleasing, smiling how often I've touched, tasted and kissed those wonderful lips Those lips, now weary, tight with pain tinged in blue as you fight to breathe, to kiss me one last time, and whisper "I love you" through those lips.

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James Peranteau

Date: 10/7/2023 10:11:00 AM

my dear poet, such the touching write...i'm that pneuma, staring up at you, praying; you remember, to wipe mine nose, mine knees up when i sit 'pon mine throne...i'm now one uv those hes, who hopes his shes, know, we luv thee....much love, me

Old Buck

Date: 6/15/2016 1:46:00 PM

TDR: For me that was a wonderful "roller coaster ride" of words and emotions. Thanks for sharing with all of us in the soup. oldbuck

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/15/2016 1:55:00 PM

Thank you, again, for the humbling compliment on my work. ~Trudy~

Skat A

Date: 6/10/2016 10:54:00 PM

Amazing write and imagery Trudy. The ending thought was touching... SKAT

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 6/15/2016 1:53:00 PM

Thank you Sweet lady. Still makes me teary eyed myself! ~Trudy~

Susan Palli

Date: 10/23/2013 12:22:00 PM

Excellent write!

Ken Carroll

Date: 8/28/2013 5:59:00 PM

Hi Trudy, A nice sensual write..Thanks for sharing.. Ken

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/21/2012 2:35:00 PM

Such a touching write..you haven't been here in a while I'm hoping you are well and cherish this memory. Happy Thanks Giving Light & Love

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 11/21/2012 9:26:00 PM

Hoping to get back here soon, with Dave sick and a new puppy, seems I have no time for me and my poetry anymore. Thank you for stopping by and commenting. I miss PS so much!

Apoorva Patrikar

Date: 9/8/2012 11:56:00 PM

sensual and beautiful

Innocent Raphael

Date: 9/7/2012 6:49:00 PM

wow, this is great

Joy Wellington

Date: 7/23/2012 6:05:00 PM

A very sensual write...good luck in the contest. Sounds like a winner. One love. Joy Wells

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 7/23/2012 6:07:00 PM

Thank you very much Joy!

Jane Kostman

Date: 7/23/2012 5:30:00 PM

What a sweet poem...reminds me of my huband and me..but he don't have a mustashe any more since he is militay. once in a while he gets fuzzy...but not to bad lol. Great write Jane XoXo

Trudy Diane Rider
Date: 7/23/2012 5:35:00 PM

Thank you for the lovely comments Jane, my husband also, no longer sports the mustache due to medical reasons now, but I remember and I have pictures...sometimes I can even still feel it...LOL