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Those dancing leaves

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Those dancing leaves

The chill of early autumn casts
A kaleidoscope of color upon
A plethora of dangling leaves
As they shimmy and shake about

Mother Nature’s frosty breath
Hastens their departure from their lofty heights
The brassy winds of autumn will  be here soon 
Bursting forth with an exuberant breathy gusto
Prompting the leaves to whirl and spin around
Dancing merrily along the ground

Reminds this creaky old observer
Of a gleeful group of school  girls
Swirling in their colorful gowns
Happily frolicking and jumping about
Joyfully doing their happy dance

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  1. Date: 11/14/2013 5:57:00 AM
    Beautiful work of art, you have created here Donald. Painted a wonderful picture on my mind.....Peter

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 12:18:00 PM
    love the win Donald, <3 SKAT

    Bennett Avatar Donald J Bennett
    Date: 10/30/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you
  1. Date: 10/28/2013 8:14:00 AM
    Congrats on the win in the contest, Donald

    Bennett Avatar Donald J Bennett
    Date: 10/30/2013 4:53:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sir
  1. Date: 10/27/2013 1:25:00 AM
    This is a nice poem friend,Congratulation on your win

    Bennett Avatar Donald J Bennett
    Date: 10/28/2013 10:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you sir.
  1. Date: 10/26/2013 9:20:00 PM
    Donald, , thank you for the support :-) CONGRATULATIONS, amazingly awesome win. Stop by my latest blog. If you's like or have time. ------ always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/13/2013 8:12:00 AM
    I felt like I was out for a chilly afternoon walk in a garden. I can smell the scent of the leaves as they're being crushed by my bare feet and I can hear the crunch w/c is kind of similar to waves pounding on the shore. :) Lovely~

  1. Date: 10/12/2013 12:30:00 PM
    This is a delightful piece of work, Donald, I thoroughly enjoyed reading! Very well written, painted a nice picture :)

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 2:01:00 PM
    Hey Donald... Nice of you to stop by. I'm glad you enjoyed my song. :o) I like what you have written here. The wording is excellent! The way you brought the two together with dancing & spinning shimming & shaking about. Very nice! I'll look forward to hearing from you again my friend.

  1. Date: 10/9/2013 1:27:00 PM
    This made me smile..a beautiful description of the girls....small typo 3rd line. BG