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Thorn Patch

Into the plush fields they went just smiling Laughing their way down the hills and diving Into the weeds and flowers alike, soft Cushion like forms allow for one aloft Even through their fun, some pain enveloped Thorns found Sally’s side, bleeding developed Her friend ran to her, offered her support Sally’s eyes cried with pain was their report After they told their parents of their day They knew their exploits weren’t over, no way Patched up and ready to go was Sally Her younger sister was always ready Where the prettiest flowers are, they know Away from the thorns, exploring they’ll go
Russell Sivey

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  1. Date: 1/25/2013 9:20:00 PM
    Hello Russell, I'm a daring kind of gal. Depends! At first i imaged a field filled with thorns. LOL..then I said ouch! Okay back to your poem. I like the first cushion image on the 4th line. and then I read Sally's ouchy. Well. i like to think lesson learned.. he the poem... and thank you very much for the comment on my poem..xox~LINDA

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 10:45:00 PM
    Hello my friend, this is really a great write and enjoyed reading it this evening. Rollo

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 10:08:00 PM
    I can almost picture these two. Brings back memories of me and my sister. Lovely!

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 7:57:00 PM
    Ah you bring back the memories of younger and wilder days, loved romping in the field back then, still do, thank you my dear man for this lovely sonnet and for all your kind visits, I have learned to wait for them as one does an old friend, have a good night, until tomorrow xxx

  1. Date: 1/24/2013 8:02:00 AM
    Ahhh!!Great work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara