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This Year

Eve of the New Year, eyes strain to see pale depths of yonder anticipating a fresh sky to gleam golden this year. With said goodbyes, I awaken, reborn in wonder of innocence held in sunlit smiles of those I hold dear and hope to value lessons learned ‘neath gracious skies swept clear. Happiness renews in a freckle faced sky of twinkling stars as I slow my pace to laze below her beauty and gaze in awe of infinity, searching for miracles beyond my many scars, and I shall live free to dance and sing, honoring God’s law, humbly glorifying Him, seeing His reflection through each flaw. Standing tall in this new year, I resolve to be more grateful, finding joy in each day and confidence to breathe life genuine. The sky will change above, the earth will spin below, and faithful, I’ll take my place amid with these ideals circling within. This year, I’ll reach for sky that never falls and dream of heaven. Written for Francine Robert's This Year in English Quintain Contest, 1/6/15

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Date: 1/9/2015 11:03:00 PM
this is a very spiritual poem and one of the best entries I have seen in this contest. you put a lot of thought into this one. your dream of heaven is praiseworthy, my friend.
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Date: 1/9/2015 11:01:00 PM
thanks for liking Big Eyes. I felt sad it didn't make the list. Let me read this one now.
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Date: 1/9/2015 3:29:00 PM
such joyful anticipation of new beginnings flavored with fine images, Rhonda!.. huggs
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Date: 1/9/2015 6:17:00 AM
Never mind 7 this is a fav for me. This is as good as poetry gets. It sings like a heveanly choir, it speaks gracefully with an ease to understand, draws pictures like a master with his pencil and pad, it dances, it does everything a poem should do. Lots of Love, Armand
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Date: 1/8/2015 8:04:00 AM
Lovely and graceful -- may we all resolve to be more generous and to find the joy in each other. Reach high my dear friend - I was inspired today by your wonderful words. I agree with Dorian, 7
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Date: 1/8/2015 12:35:00 AM
Excellent pen Rhonda ! I really enjoyed your piece dear friend. A 7 from me! I wish you the best in 2015 ! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xxx D.
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