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This World We Have Created

This world we have created- neatly sown earth ripe for the planting. This world had been perfect- silent creeks and boisterous waterfalls. This land that was once Mother Nature's- destroyed for some superfluous coffee shop where liars and womanizers lay in wait. These words from our mouths- are a right given to us by "Law;" are they not going to be spoken without such written privilege? False worshippers- i speak not of a religion, but of the followers. hoping living in the shadow of their God is a ticket to life after death. This world we have created- it saddens me. These lives we now lead- frivolous and jocund. Greed- it runs our lives now. Monetary value is the way the world earns its keep. A higher being or a mere fraction off a fraction of a chance has given us this Earth. Someone gave us a mold, and we said "To Hell with it!" They won't even own up to the actions they've taken. Neither will I. A white sheep in a herd of white sheep. Who am I to call out a mistake? This world we have created- it saddens me so; but if one should ask if i've taken affirmative action, the answer shall be "No."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/10/2010 11:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Nicholas. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2010 8:04:00 AM
NICHOLAS, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Nicholas. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/22/2010 7:43:00 PM
So much truth in your words. Though the world goes through it's ups and downs, there are always good people around to give me hope. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you are enjoying your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/9/2010 5:07:00 PM
Thank you all for the kind comments and for just letting me have someone that understands instead of questions every word. Thank you for getting it. :]
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Date: 3/9/2010 2:02:00 PM
a compelling read rife with truisms and futility...well done!
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:05:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Nicholas. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors always. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 12:01:00 PM
so true, well expressed
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Date: 3/8/2010 8:02:00 PM
I'm very happy to read that the way the world is today is of our own making, because of our own rebellion and mistakes, to serve what? the Self? Seems like it, huh. I said that because I hear too many people blaming God for the way things are. Great write, and in our own way, I think we can help change things, but I must start with myself. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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