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Oh- feet of mine that walk the meadows vast and green where azure skies and clouds unfold and a stream comes babbling on a long climb and wind like violins whisper cold as leaves twirl red, orange and gold and in the swaying trees birds sing sublime melodies serene Oh- this withered threshold where time is lingering in a season in-between where bees drink from a faded marigold and there are so many lovely scenes to behold Oh- I turn weary footsteps to a shaded place to find a hued space quiet ______________________ September 07, 2022 Poetry/Rhyme/this withered threshold Copyright Protected, ID 09-1485-898-07 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Premiere contest, A Brian Strand Premiere Choice sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 09/09/2022 Fourth Place

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Date: 9/20/2022 9:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Constance. There is such serenity in your words as nature becomes a haven for you soothing your seeking heart with color, sights and sounds. Blessings on your journey my friend.
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Date: 9/20/2022 6:22:00 PM
Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations ,compliment and comment, blessings ~
Date: 9/10/2022 7:31:00 AM
Way to go with this winning work. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this winner and dropping by my page with congrats. Sara
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Date: 9/10/2022 8:12:00 AM
Sara, thank you so much for the visit and congratulations _gratitude ~
Date: 9/9/2022 9:33:00 PM
"like violins whisper", "bees drink from a faded marigold" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:05:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations _gratitude ~
Date: 9/9/2022 6:01:00 PM
Take us with you! A deep, soulful write, Constance, congrats on your win, a fave
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:05:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congrats and the FAV _gratitude ~
Date: 9/9/2022 4:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. A beautiful autumn vision. :)Paulette
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Date: 9/10/2022 7:06:00 AM
Paulette, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment _gratitude~
Date: 9/7/2022 1:33:00 PM
Beautifullly written! Very nice :)
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Constance La France
Date: 9/7/2022 3:08:00 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for the compliment, peace and tranquility ~

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