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''This Weeping Love''

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this sad heart broken heart heart aching heart delicate and weeping weeping lost love weeping to God God oh almighty God can you hear this girl girl of sadness girl of love love mine love like a sword sword that stabs my happiness sword of love's memory memory that comes in dreams memory and family secrets secrets hidden secrets from the past past buried past dead with the beloved beloved lay in death beloved family husband baby baby who never saw the sky baby oh the love love locked within love that inspires me to write poems poems from my dripping pen poems of love love and sorrow written in blood love has made me this poet poet of painted words poet of rhyme and verse verse of love verses of love flowing flowing and floating for eternity flowing with love and forlorn beauty beauty is poetry beauty in natures scenery scenery to take your breath away scenery down a beaten path path winding in a forest path to love endless endless the poems of love love and love love of a broken heart heart bleeding crimson bleeding . . . _____________________________ May 18, 2015 Poetry/Blitz/This Weeping Love Copyright Protected, ID 05-675-202-18 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France

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Emile Pinet

Date: 5/20/2015 12:47:00 PM

Like the German blitz of world war two your words attacked the reader with overpowering speed and agility. Emile. #7

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/20/2015 9:43:00 AM

Thanks for taking my suggestion.

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/20/2015 6:01:00 AM

This is fascinating,so touched,imagery flow through the lines, I enjoy reading your poems..........excellent write...........Afolabi.

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/19/2015 9:00:00 PM

Wow! This is just beautiful! I enjoyed watching what you so brilliantly penned in this form. 7 - Alexis

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/19/2015 8:43:00 AM

Try "Heart Felt Write" I think it works well and fits the form.

Constance La France
Date: 5/19/2015 10:00:00 AM

Thanks Richard it does work

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/19/2015 8:40:00 AM

A very effective use of the form. I hope you don't abandon the form because you did it justice.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 5/19/2015 4:38:00 AM

Broken wings, love the journey of your words.... the imagery is also wow!!!! bleeding heart that i have these last days..but God is good HE restores ~olive eloisa

Nandita Das

Date: 5/19/2015 12:37:00 AM

A great blitz. Dripping with sorrow....Very well done. 7

Edward Ebbs

Date: 5/18/2015 10:42:00 PM

Do not loose your hope for a future and keep your faith strong. Just remember that the breaks in the heart can be where the light shines in. A very touching and personal poem, thank you for sharing...Just Ed

Justin Worthy

Date: 5/18/2015 9:21:00 PM

Awesome imagery it gave me.. Great poem

Constance La France

Date: 5/18/2015 6:16:00 PM

Blitz seems easy but it is not, 50 lines of short phrases and images in rapid fire, like one long thought, no punctuation and a complicated repetitive word pattern through out the poem and with the ending and the title... this is my third attempt

Constance La France
Date: 5/19/2015 4:15:00 AM

I tweeked the title, the way I was suppose to do it just did not feel right to me, not sure I will ever do another Blitz, I felt restrainted, I need the space to write, do you know what I mean, short phrases just are not my thing . .