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This Way

its like driving down the road too fast its like wanting your memory to everlast its like this rush i get when i say your name its like after this nothing will ever be the same its like a ride you get in line for time after time its like when you smile and fake everything is fine its like laughing when any second you could cry its like all the questions answerd but you still ask why its like me telling this to the world wondering what to say its like i am wondering if they have ever felt THIS WAY

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/11/2009 9:05:00 PM
Yes, I wonder sometimes if others are feeling the way I am,too. I like your 'repeating line technique". Keep 'em coming Sincerely yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/11/2009 5:00:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Autumn. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:41:00 PM
Such a joy to read!! there is so much excitement in your words!! :)
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Date: 9/10/2009 6:30:00 PM
rushing smiles! this fine write be! Autumn!...jim
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