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This Was His Name

"Pass the salt!" Over and over again in Arabic Like my father's final dream Of a young, perfect Abraham Set in stone stars Falling into the world with vigor Slowly, Slowly now, children... We are going back to the other side.

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Date: 9/26/2019 1:03:00 PM
enigmatic verse got me noggin rereading the lines attempting to convey journeying...? perhaps where spent life journeys, though somewhat cryptic, holistic, operatic... the wordsworth their their weight in... what else... salt.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 11/26/2019 5:48:00 PM
Thanks Matthew!
Date: 5/13/2019 8:08:00 AM
Takes one into the unseen, nice effect, Jasmine
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 5/13/2019 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, James!
Date: 4/24/2019 3:16:00 PM
A poem of significance..well written, Jasmine.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 4/24/2019 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Vijay!
Date: 4/23/2019 11:24:00 PM
Jasmine ! So good to see you again ! And this poem is a great return, excellent write. More to follow, I hope.
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Jasmine Koria
Date: 4/24/2019 1:57:00 PM
Thanks Lawrence! Good to be back :)

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