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This Valentine's Day

my first love letter you refused it long ago.... a bleeding numb heart you kept me waiting at the closed door of your heart.... an eternal wait my last love letter please open the door just once.... this Valentine's Day ==========================

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Dinda Minardi

Date: 3/4/2012 7:15:00 AM

Congratulations again, Kash! this is very sweet :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/4/2012 6:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this excellent piece Kash. Love, Carol

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/4/2012 3:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kash, well done, and for all your recent wins in case I have missed any xxooxx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/3/2012 9:48:00 PM

KASH, CongratS with your wonderful entry IN Olajide Adelana CONTEST ;-) well done~ALWAYS PD*

David Williams

Date: 3/3/2012 1:51:00 PM

Kash congrats on your HM, I love this..David

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/22/2012 8:25:00 PM

how you entice me , kashi buddy... lots of sugary cheers to you for a dazzling win! :) huggs

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/21/2012 7:11:00 AM

Great Lovey Dovey poem...you are a patient lover it seeeeems..Congrats on this yet another fine win. Gwendolen

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 1/21/2012 4:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, loved it, Elizabeth

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2012 8:55:00 PM

Aha, you used a winner from last year at this same time. Way to GO, Kash. You are getting wise to the ways of the contests and it was a great pleasure to review this one again By the way, I included a glossary of the meanings of all my slang in my 80's poem. I hope it helps you understand the poem completely. Normal americans did not talk that way, but all americans used a few of those expressions!

Sadaf Syed

Date: 1/20/2012 11:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/20/2012 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kash. Love, Carol

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/20/2012 11:39:00 AM

Congrats on your win. This one is different...It's almost like a plea.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/20/2012 9:47:00 AM

congrats kash on a terrific win for this loving poetry my friend.. awesome as usual...luv

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/24/2011 10:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest "Special Sentimental Senryu". Long list of winners so glad to see your name among them Kashinath. Love, Carol

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 2/18/2011 8:07:00 AM

I rate this very high, lovely flow, congrats, Déirdre