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This Touching Feeling, Is You

Our relationship felt like a ...abomination Heart so scorn and broken But This affection, touching spirit running threw my spine Passion touching my skin and making me spin Yearning for my blood Yes, I praise For struggle to fight for our love It's worth the fight I attempt to cherish our relationship Tease me please Flame reach my finger tips For love, I taste you all the way Tender feeling, stay in my cup Over flow, no For love has reached my inner soul As, I cry no more Flowers bloom my tears Bamboozle no longer lives here I scream Only you Only my boo Only my true love Which is you TeddyBoo

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Good Night

Date: 12/21/2012 8:43:00 PM

i like the passion in this one nice job :-)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/10/2012 7:38:00 AM

A poem with soft and good feelings, love it - It is written by a really good poet. (You Delilah !) - thank you! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/9/2012 12:01:00 PM

Hi There I used all your words but I had to connect them with some of my own to make a poem? Is that OK? Above you didn't use ONLY the words on your list but you did use ALL of them..please let me know. I can do a new write if needs be. Light & Love

Vicky Tsiluma

Date: 11/8/2012 12:05:00 AM

I LOVE it! The theme, the beat, the arrangment - all well done. Fighting for love can be an uphill struggle but the fruits are oh so joyous. Nice! (And thank you).

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/7/2012 11:08:00 PM

LOVELY ELEGANT WORDS OF ROMANTIC EXPRESSION DELILAH .. LUV THE PRESENTATION OF FLOWING SENTIMENTS LUV .. THANKXX SO MUCH FOR MY BIG WIN IN ADULTERY ..NOTHING SPEAKS LIKE EXPERIENCE ..AND U GAVE POETS A GREAT CHALLENGE .. AM HONORED LUV.