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This This This

On such a magical nite like this this this A dream can hardly contain a wish wish wish Though carefull not to make a list list list For it's not by the waving of wrist wrist wrist Nor by pounding of fist fist fist Just a simple request for a kiss kiss kiss Could bring a heart much bliss bliss bliss

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/12/2013 2:46:00 PM

loved the way it rhymes ,,,, thank you for reading my " I was there watching" I do wonder what yo thought it was ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/5/2012 3:45:00 PM

this one is lots of fun, john. so why did you say "you gotta be kidding?" did you go see the ad of Joe in his hanes pantyhose? hahaha

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/3/2012 4:38:00 PM

This shines with great style John; therepetition adds so much andI loved the way it slidethrough the mind as I read! Love, Lizzie

Gwendolen Song

Date: 11/2/2012 10:56:00 AM

A strong effect...almost like a studder...your repetition works well in this one, John...Have a grand weekend...constantly in prayer for those east coasters affected the most!....luv, gwendolen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/2/2012 10:07:00 AM

Ahhh!!Great work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/2/2012 9:09:00 AM

Very good, good, good, Enjoyed the read.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2012 5:40:00 AM

~Wow~amazing poetry you have shared with us John III. I have enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back Monday to read more and hope you keep posting more and more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love, Carol

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 11/2/2012 5:32:00 AM

there's nothing much to say to this this this really is there? but if you behave yourself you might get a kiss kiss kiss...and waving your wrist wrist wrist and pounding your fist fist fist are two things I imagine you do very well :-)

John Loving Iii
Date: 11/2/2012 8:12:00 AM

Just lucky fist and kiss in the same poem.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/2/2012 2:31:00 AM

This is so good John, and it gets better with each reading xx

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 11/1/2012 7:58:00 PM

This is one creative write...loving the flow!!

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 11/1/2012 5:47:00 PM

‡ I Beheld Myself As A Tiny Little Girl Towards The End Of This Sweet Pretty Poem, Beautiful Precious John. Being Lullaby'd By Its Repetitives Soothing Serenty. Sweet Kisses, Rachel *