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This Poem Really Sucks

Mummy Dummy 11~07~14 Sponsor Jerry T Curtis This Poem really S****s Thanks for my first ever negative comment That is terrible.... J/K ....hugs Tim

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Shane Cooper

Date: 1/12/2015 10:19:00 PM

No way Jose, this rocks! love Shane

Shane Cooper
Date: 1/13/2015 1:12:00 AM

I saw how many you have written. I read them all this afternoon as well as some by others, i was research to try and write something in response to this, it really is good love Shane xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 1/13/2015 1:08:00 AM

This form is a footle Shane I love these poems - so few words can say so much:-) Hugs Jan xx

Ct Duet

Date: 12/3/2014 3:12:00 PM

Congrats Jan ...It still sucks as opposed to Maurice's ex-wife....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 12/3/2014 3:16:00 PM

thanks Tim:-) hugs Jan x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/1/2014 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, you have to go back 5 pages to find the results of this contest. That's the difference between this poem and my ex- wife...this poem sucks. Now I have to fave it.

Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 11:10:00 AM

lol Maurice:-) Hugs Jan x

James Fraser

Date: 11/9/2014 5:14:00 PM

I've just thrown my Footles out of the Pram. For what I've written, has been undone = haha - I love it Jan. No work tomorrow and a koolio Footle, yep, it doesn't get better than that :) xxxx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2014 5:22:00 PM

We should do a few footles together James - I do love the simplicity yet impact of their short form:-) I don't have a poem with negative comments James so just wrote this for fun for the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Horne

Date: 11/9/2014 3:09:00 PM

lol, had a chuckle here - love your sense of humour. Sure, feel free to post the poem, my friend

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2014 3:12:00 PM

Thanks so much Jack - I need to find out how to do it - we have a new system at work! Hugs jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/9/2014 1:54:00 PM

- SSS****SSS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :))))

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/9/2014 1:58:00 PM

- Yes, I know my friend :))) - my comments too :))))

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2014 1:56:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise its just a fun write:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/9/2014 10:18:00 AM

mine is worse... i like this though, jan...huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2014 11:43:00 AM

Thanks Nette I just did it for fun really:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/8/2014 7:12:00 PM

Can't be found hidden in my old posts.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/9/2014 11:42:00 AM

It must have been a bad dream Maurice:-) hugs jan x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/8/2014 6:44:00 PM

I had a poem with hundreds of views and zero comments. I entered that in the contest. People are not allowed to be mean here so no comment means bad. I intend to win. I think it is just as hard to write a really bad poem as a really good one. Only mediocre is easy.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 7:00:00 PM

I will go comment on it Maurice because I know you can't write a bad one in my eyes:-) hugs jan xx

Vera Duggan

Date: 11/8/2014 6:21:00 PM

Oh Jan where has your muse gone, at least it rhymes, take care my friend....Vera.........

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 6:41:00 PM

lol thanks Vera my muse had blown a fuse and done a runner - what a bummer lol:-) hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/8/2014 4:25:00 PM

How about..."This Poem Really Sucks"...Hoover...Mover!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 5:53:00 PM

LOL I like that one Maurice you should post it lol:-) hugs jan x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/8/2014 4:22:00 PM

I came back again. Still nothing. How does a guy get his rocks off with all this false advertising. You should of called it blue balls. In fact with that title you might win. Truth in advertising! Never mind, Scotland Yard would be after you.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 5:52:00 PM

LOL Maurice - I hope I don't get place becasue it would mean it was REALLY bad lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2014 4:07:00 PM

Jan, you hit three birds with one stone: the title...the content...the reaction!!! Let the judge decide:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 5:51:00 PM

It's simply a bit of fun - maybe at my own expense lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/8/2014 2:18:00 PM

With that title; I had to read it. Yep! Nicely summed.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 5:50:00 PM

Thanks ML :-) Hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/8/2014 10:51:00 AM

you got it nailed Jan gl in contest hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 11:13:00 AM

Thanks Shadow I just wrote this one for fun I don't expect to get anywhere in the contest lol Hugs jan xx

Darlene Gifford

Date: 11/8/2014 8:27:00 AM

A footle? I've never written one, Jan, so I'll have to read up on the form and try to write one. Sounds like fun! But negative comments, Wow! I'd have to develop a thicker skin. Blessings, Darlene

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 11:11:00 AM

Oh I love the footles Darlene they are so simple 2 syllables each word that rhyme - we have had lots of fun with them quite recently:-) Hugs jan x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2014 7:05:00 AM

Well, if written by a teenager it would be understandable..Ha!!Ha!!!..Or if written by someone who loves the new craze of "The Walking Dead" or movies where the mummy comes back to life..Good thought for the contest though..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/8/2014 8:06:00 AM

Everyone has an opinion...It is an okay Footle to me..I won't say that it is bad..Sara

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 7:07:00 AM

Thanks Sara - I just wanted a poem for the contest - I'm happy to say I've not had negative comments on my poems ... or are people just being kind and I need to start reading between the lines lol:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/8/2014 3:23:00 AM

Oh Jan cud u not be yet more precise ? GL in contest dear!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 3:33:00 AM

I could always do another one on the virtues of being a dumb mum - I can ask my son!!!! lol:-) hugs jan x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/7/2014 10:19:00 PM

hahahaha.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 3:18:00 AM

You're NOT meant to laugh Andrea cos the poem sucks lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/7/2014 7:58:00 PM

First of all a poem that could do that for a guy (and yes I am referring to the promise of pleasure in the title) has got to be good. Secondly, there is a kumbaya type of meld in the words "mummy dummy". I'm sorry Jan, you blew it with this one. It is really good. Kiss this contest goodbye or enter something else. I know cut and paste one of mine. Guaranteed a first place win in this contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/8/2014 3:18:00 AM

LOL you always make me smile Maurice - I have never had any really negative comment just a couple of nasty ones aimed at women and I ignored them:-) Hugs Jan xx