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KEEP OVER-PRICED IN XMAS to hell with hallmark and their bourgeois cards of greeting purchased predomantly by husbands who are cheating while their eyes are fixed on a teenage blonde who wiggles for older men only as she leaves her high school fling on Christmas day feeling lost and lonely to hell with macy's and their senile Santa in a cheap suit to hell with their sales with which veracity has a dispute i shed no tears for Sears and Roebuck too and to The Home Depot and it's ilk I say "buck you" there's fake snow and fake snowballs that will never melt as Senile Santa loosens his belt and takes another belt Walmart and K-Mart sell the same damned crap but at Macy's your brat gets to sit on senile Santa's soiled lap the ads for toys on television go on ad infinitum while commercialism and greed become an item these are all places where Christ and Christmas spirit is defied and I don't think a really good sale is why my Savior Jesus died (c) 2011.....phree

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Date: 4/18/2011 11:38:00 AM
Your poem speaks nothing but truth and the truth never dies, Jeffry. You are blessed with this vision. To be in a place where you see pass the existing illusions and tinsels meant to distract is a kind of gift. Never lose it, and at the same time,never let bitterness into your heart. Keep sharing your thoughts through your gift and if just one person is inspired, you would have done well, my friend. God bless this Holy Week. Annalise
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Date: 4/18/2011 5:22:00 AM
I think this is awesome! a very good interpretation of what xmas has become and what it should be! I love the anger.
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