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This Perfect Spot

There's a perfect spot Just a climb from the beach Its my desire to be there With my blond haired peach It's secluded and private Is this rocky edge Where our love of tomorrow To her I will pledge We will lie on our backs Our eyes caressing the sky Watching cotton wool clouds Floating gently by We will close our eyes Open our ears to the sounds Of natures orchestra In symphony surround The sun will beat down On us two naked souls For soon we'll be one Is our perfect spot goal We turn to each other As our lips gently meet Undulations, discovering Our sugary sweet We mimic the waves As they pleasure the shore Voicing in sync Echoing their roar With the cooling breeze Serenading our skin As we unite our love To each other, from within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/16/2010 6:53:00 AM
Nice flow as the waves of the ocean James. A nicely flowing Quatrain. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/16/2010 6:18:00 AM
Very passionate write on this day in Spring...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 5/16/2010 5:34:00 AM
A very descriptive piece James, well written!
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Date: 5/16/2010 4:02:00 AM
You make me feel of the perfect spot,
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:40:00 PM
You make me want to find a wonderful spot too. :-) Great write Highlander!
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:35:00 PM
a wonderful spot James, enjoyed,..p.d
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Date: 5/15/2010 4:06:00 PM
This is beautiful, I love all the imagery. Fantastic romantic write.
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Date: 5/15/2010 2:59:00 PM
sounds like a great spot! very calming and relaxing read
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Date: 5/15/2010 2:17:00 PM
Beautiful images of lovers at the shore, James. Very nice flow and a romantic treat for the reader! Best always, Carolyn
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