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This Old Man and the Cabin

Dusted shelves cobweb lanterns weak floors tell tales  of those who walked. Rusted nails explain no answers his wooden frail, rustic box. (so he burned it)   "Leave this planet you darkened cabin. spare this old man his sanity!" He burned his past smoke carried it vast. off to heaven  to the Old Man's family.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/7/2013 12:22:00 AM
nicely written, kinda reminded me of my Missing Pieces or Massacre,,, with times passed , great job ;}
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Date: 6/25/2012 9:29:00 AM
nice write Patrick
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Patrick Farley Iv
Date: 6/26/2012 5:19:00 PM
Thank you richard!
Date: 6/24/2012 9:43:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read your work! Lori
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Date: 6/24/2012 12:58:00 PM
Thank you, I appreciate it!

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