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This Old Castle

This Old Castle This old castle, groans under the bright sky stones weeping from blood soaked in long ago. Granite walls and invaders to deny, forced entry or even catapult throw! This old castle, dark nights music creeps out sad songs tell of blood and decaying bones. Many say ghosts scream and float all about whispered curses in agonized low tones! This old castle, fortress to protect life boiling oil poured on attackers below. Death, sad pain washed in misery and strife war the worst kind of dark and bloody show! Old castle quietly guards its sad tales. Yet often, one hears those sad midnight wails. Robert J. Lindley, 12-19-2015 Form: Sonnet Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: Total # Words: 103

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Date: 2/28/2016 9:30:00 AM
I would have liked to be a poor knight Of your old Castle to watch each night And let enter at first only a lonely dove To change it palace with power of love.
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Date: 12/24/2015 7:33:00 AM
when the rains fall, they will feel so warm even in cold if they are poured through your lines. You are superb, fantastic and just wow! Its nice I visited this page. Compliments of the season dear poet!
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Date: 12/19/2015 2:16:00 PM
- Wonderful sonnet ...... a spooky old castle (definitely ghosts there :) - I wish you and your family a peaceful and beautiful Christmas, Robert :) - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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