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This Love For You Brings Out a Million Tears

This love for you brings out a million tears, When you left me with a doubtful promise; That you will be back so I'll never miss, The things we shared for a couple of years. But fate provided me nothing but fears For your advent’s impossible to please Even if I pray, beg down on my knees Your voice, so sweet, again cannot be hears. So I lift up with smile, tears in my eyes Reminiscing the presence of your love Hoping for the chance this life had given While gazing peacefully at the blue sky ‘cause I know that you’re watching from above, smiling with restfulness there in heaven.

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Skat A

Date: 10/4/2016 8:06:00 PM

Laian, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Aiyah Torres

Date: 10/1/2016 3:17:00 PM

This is sadandwrote with intense love within..I feel for you, Laian :)Keep rocking your poetry!!!:O)) hugs,Aiyah

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/30/2016 9:08:00 PM

Laian, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Tim Smith

Date: 9/30/2016 8:20:00 AM

A terrific Italian sonnet Laian. We need to smile and remember all the good times knowing they live in your heart.

Manmath Dalei

Date: 9/30/2016 7:47:00 AM

Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love