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This Love

This love stops burning on the torch. I sit on the porch, Waiting for my love to return to me. Then I see, He is not coming back. So I get my things packed. With all the things I lack, I still go. . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/30/2008 5:48:00 PM
this is a very good poem. it explains a heartbreak in a very good way.
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Date: 10/29/2008 4:48:00 PM
what if he yells at me? and i cant make long distance calls on my house phone and he's blocked form my phone
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Date: 10/29/2008 3:35:00 PM
Why are you in love with me?
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Date: 10/29/2008 3:14:00 PM
ok...with who?
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Date: 10/29/2008 3:03:00 PM
what?
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Date: 10/29/2008 2:43:00 PM
Your story.
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