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He smiled behind the wish to cry Spoke through determination to be silent And all the while she continued to shine "Tell me", he said, "tell me what stars remain to be plucked? You dimmed them all You drowned the moon You shunned the sun" "Look deep inside", she said "You do not live in me or I in you Find that little ember And rekindle yourself" And with that final flicker of a smile she disappeared

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Date: 8/23/2017 1:08:00 PM
Great poem, I love your style. I'm so glad I found you on poetry soup! I look forward to reading your poems, thanks for sharing.
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Darren White
Date: 8/23/2017 11:48:00 PM
Thanks Iris, I hope you like what you read.
Date: 8/21/2017 6:07:00 AM
You are distinct, as usual, Darren. You know how to put it across. Ram
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Darren White
Date: 8/22/2017 1:03:00 AM
Ram, Thank you so much :)
Date: 8/21/2017 4:55:00 AM
If only. Wonderfully-penned and exquisitely imagined ... love it, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 8/22/2017 1:02:00 AM
Thanks my friend, happy you love it :)
Date: 8/18/2017 7:33:00 PM
This is just such splendid poetry, loved this poem!
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Darren White
Date: 8/19/2017 12:25:00 AM
Hi my friend, I'm happy you like this!
Date: 8/17/2017 8:46:00 PM
Oh, this is divine, Duir! A must keep! In the bag, it goes! Absolutely love this one
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Darren White
Date: 8/17/2017 11:32:00 PM
Thanks Budgie, your crane bag contains many of my poems now, I feel honoured :)
Date: 8/17/2017 12:33:00 PM
A very compelling thought well written.
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Darren White
Date: 8/17/2017 11:32:00 PM
Patricia, thank you :)
Date: 8/17/2017 10:25:00 AM
A beautiful peace rests on these words; lovely work dear poet. xomo
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Darren White
Date: 8/17/2017 11:30:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 8/17/2017 9:48:00 AM
I can so relate to this my friend. That candle seems to blow out all too often for me.
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Darren White
Date: 8/17/2017 11:29:00 PM
Yeah, I know my friend. Big hug for you <3
Date: 8/17/2017 7:21:00 AM
Great write, Darren, keep shining:)
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Darren White
Date: 8/17/2017 11:29:00 PM
I will, Jo, promise.
Date: 8/17/2017 6:30:00 AM
This is a great message. Very nice to read today, Darren :)
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Darren White
Date: 8/17/2017 11:28:00 PM
Thanks Heidi :)

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