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This Life I Detest

This Life I detest For Happiness only comes in moments now. We have done so many things... "But what is bad or good that thinking makes it so..." Maybe it is I who is changing color-- Still I so want to point the finger 6/1/'13

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Toshia Hall

Date: 7/9/2013 1:22:00 PM

Simply so. Loved it.

Allan Koven

Date: 6/18/2013 9:35:00 PM

Ah another depressive soul. You expressed yourself well. So many of us feel the same

Gabe Shelly
Date: 6/19/2013 2:07:00 PM

Thank-you. gabe

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/8/2013 4:13:00 PM

I likes the ending, we always want to have someone to blame , I enjoyed this write Gabe, ~always, Linda

Gabe Shelly
Date: 6/8/2013 6:47:00 PM

Thanks Linda. gabe