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This Last Autumn Leaf

This last autumn leaf Without resistance it falls. Then drifting gently, It lands it's golden form upon her soft, smiling face.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 10:21:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this lovely tanka. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/2/2012 9:09:00 PM
DANIEL... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 2/29/2012 2:57:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Daniel! Good job. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/29/2012 1:03:00 AM
Wonderful Tanka here.Congrats Daniel on your win.
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Date: 2/28/2012 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's "Short Verse" contest Daniel. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2012 10:09:00 AM
I can picture this very easily. Nice tanka, Daniel. Love, Kim
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Date: 2/27/2012 4:59:00 AM
funny picture yet Ibet you had other ideas.....well written tanka! Hope you are enjoying your time at the soup and will jump right in and share your flavors with us!!
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Date: 2/27/2012 4:29:00 AM
Lovely Tanka Daniel, thank you. - Anne-Lise
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