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This Is Who I Am

I’m quirky and smirky yet tender with affection, dorky at times, a little flirty with my hubby. I love the feeling of a real genuine connection, an get down and dirty even though a lil’ chubby. I feel with my heart on my sleeve without reprieve, know not of jealousy but kindness and empathy. Sometimes my sarcasm is so hard to believe, though I am enriched in hope and sympathy. I laugh too loud and snort out my Polish nose, cuz’ to me life can be seen as too darn funny. I know a secret maybe no one else knows, it’s that I find no importance in money. Forgiveness may not come very easy to me, my pure soul has been burned a time or two. But in time I am known to bestow gentle mercy, but you only get three chances then we’re through! My faith runs deep and sometimes I lose sleep over my daughter and her anxious mind. But she talks me sincerely and those secrets I keep because a good relationship with a child is hard to find. I'm a gifted writer and a bloody nail biter, I say things sometimes I don't really mean. There are times I am weak, sometimes a fighter, but in those times in life I prevail and redeem. Honesty and loyalty are of importance and value, they are the two things that I yearn for in life. I’m the best mother, daughter, sister and friend to you, and of course… I was born the most loving wife. You want to know who I really am, huh do you? Well I’ll say in a few simple words to you today. I am a woman who loves fiercely and pray you do too, because with love in life there’s no room for dismay. So be kind to me I’m very intensely sensitive and if it’s okay with you I’d like to stay that way. I live for today and to others love to give, maybe more should be like me in the world today. Who Do You Think You Are Contest August 22, 2018

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Date: 9/29/2018 1:59:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/28/2018 8:54:00 PM
Congrats on your win. And I totally agree, Laura. There should be a lot more like you in the world today. The world would definitely be a better place. Line xx
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Date: 8/30/2018 6:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Enjoyed.
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Date: 8/28/2018 4:33:00 PM
The heart is certainly all the way out there on your sleeve. You're are a gutsy gall---and a fine writer. Congrats on your win, Laura. Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/28/2018 12:21:00 PM
The last 2 stanzas are outstanding. I like this very much.
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Date: 8/28/2018 8:25:00 AM
I like who you are, congrats on top placement.
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:09:00 PM
A fabulous bio poem, thanks for just being you LuLoo:-) The third stanza made me smile I can relate to both parts of it especially the unimportance of money - my hubbies cancer gave us both a real reality check!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/27/2018 1:01:00 PM
Being back to congratulate to win top. Hugs
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Date: 8/27/2018 12:35:00 PM
You are beautiful Luloo, and so is your poem. I've been known to snort while laughing too ;) Congratulations on your top win! xomo
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Date: 8/23/2018 12:22:00 PM
I like you what you are. Me also following same principle. all the best.
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Date: 8/22/2018 6:28:00 PM
Sounds like you're pretty balanced! I think being sensitive is a good quality, for If I know to be sensitive to me, I am sensitive to you.
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Date: 8/22/2018 9:01:00 AM
How boring life would be if we were all the same. So glad you are who you are Laura, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 8/22/2018 11:29:00 AM
thank you Charlie! :)-luloo

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