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This Is Where I Belong

I'm alone, unable to leave what I started. If you must judge my every flaw, Then please don't touch me, This is where I belong. I am just another shadowed being, Waiting for forgiveness from high above. You'll only get hurt, please stay away, This is where I belong. Refrain from your questions, I can't speak, For all I can spew are the worst sins. If you want to stay innocent, keep your distance, This is where I belong. Oh, dear, how I long to touch the light of day, To feel the sun's warms rays against my skin. But I would fade if I tried to make it there, so This is where I belong. Can you hear me?

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Verlena S. Walker

Date: 12/12/2014 4:54:00 PM

Nice Broken. Very nice... Enjoyed... Verlena

Frisk Carris
Date: 12/13/2014 4:00:00 PM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/10/2014 9:01:00 PM

I am with Carl, what he said to you was perfect. And I like your writing style here.

Frisk Carris
Date: 12/12/2014 12:03:00 PM

Thank you

Carl Fraser

Date: 12/10/2014 8:12:00 PM

Well your one of Gods creations just like the rest of us, no better, no worse. Sometimes it takes time to see light from the depths of the pit. I pray you find your way. And by the way you do belong, blessings Carl

Frisk Carris
Date: 12/12/2014 12:03:00 PM

Thank you for your kindness, I just can't seem to find where I fit in at the moment. But I find it bit by bit, thank you so much. Every little word makes a difference.