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This Is the Place

this is the place that feels like home where the smell of chlorine fills your nose and diving into the water, you just wish that it was hotter. this is the place where you feel that rush and over the room falls a hush as the competitors take the blocks waiting for the timers to ready their clocks. this is the place where you cheer on your friends, during the 500 that never seems to end countless laps of slow freestyle after it feels as if you swam a mile and this is the place where you sprint to the wall and always try to give it your all. your goggles tight and your cap on, this is the place where you belong.

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Date: 5/14/2016 7:20:00 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Megan. :)
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Date: 5/12/2016 11:20:00 AM
Megan, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/11/2016 10:38:00 PM
Megan, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT,
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Date: 5/11/2016 1:08:00 PM
- Hi Megan :) - Thanks for your first lovely poems :) - Poems can say much or little - A poem tells me, thoughts, wishes, dreams, wisdom, happy or sad ...... deepness or powerfully - Most of all, have fun and welcome to PoetrySoup :) - // Sun :)
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Date: 5/11/2016 11:10:00 AM
Megan, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead.....//:) hugs
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