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This poem was originally posted on 8-16-16. I reposted it for the"A" form contest. It was inspired by Mike And Lin's ABC rhyme poem. Enjoy

Although I'm little distant, I love you on this day Because I love you more than I did yesterday Come lay with me on this beautiful today Don't hesitate let's have fun and play Each moment with you is spring time in May Follow your heart, and let it have it's say Give me all of you, that is the only way Handle my heart with care,I'll never stray I want to be with you forever and always Join me on this lovely and romantic sleigh Keep our romance fun, let's roll in the hay Let's be together until we're old and gray My heart and soul is yours, and will forever stay New beginnings are coming and always at bay On this day I want to be your wife don't delay Please say yes, we'll go to Hawaii and I'll wear a lei Quit thinking about all we have on our tray Rest assured I'm ready to throw all negativity away Sorry I brought all this up on your birthday Trust in God he is the potter we're the clay Understand we can't do this halfway Venturing out of the box will make us giddy and gay With you I will take you hand down life's pathway X-ray your heart so it could be on display You are my whole world, I'm happy as a bluejay Zestfulness is what you give, is what I'm trying to convey 12-7-16 Contest: A Form Poem Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2016 3:16:00 PM

This is such a challenging form Alexis and you nailed it - many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/14/2016 3:20:00 PM

Hi Jan, Thank you so much. I appreciate you coming by to congratulate me:-) Alexis

Darren White

Date: 12/14/2016 2:45:00 AM

It flows so nicely, and I like it how you tackled the X. Congratulations :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/14/2016 8:02:00 AM

Hi Darren, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you came by to congratulations: -) Alexis

Constance La France

Date: 12/13/2016 1:58:00 PM

Alexis, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned, ABC, well done ~

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/13/2016 2:17:00 PM

Hi BW, You held a good contest. Thanks for my placement: -) Alexis

John Hamilton

Date: 12/13/2016 8:48:00 AM

This is great Alexis, even better with second read! What a skill you have, an ABC with Monorhyme, no wonder you got a great win here! Congrats

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/13/2016 2:27:00 PM

Congrats to you too: -) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/13/2016 2:26:00 PM

Hi John, Thanks for such an awesome comment. It caused me to smile. I remember you commenting on it the first time. :-) Alexis

Afzal Nusker

Date: 12/11/2016 12:45:00 PM

A very romantic poem. I know the form is ABC but also a monorhyme. This is the longest monorhyme, I have ever come across. Not easy. You did a wonderful job with this one. 7

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/11/2016 12:50:00 PM

Hi Afzal, Thank you so much for such a wonderful comment. I agree the monorhyme part was long. It may be the last one that I do long. Thanks for the 7 and the visit: -) Alexis

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/9/2016 1:37:00 AM

These are challenging Alexis and you excelled! Your P line...it's spelled lei. This is impressive work Alexis. Best of luck in the contest. ; ) 7

Peter Dome

Date: 12/8/2016 11:16:00 AM

Wow this is an excellent write. Clever girl. Great content my talented friend. Well done. Pete.

Paloma P

Date: 12/8/2016 5:52:00 AM

Wow, no easy feat Alexis, it's a winner in my book, good luck.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/7/2016 9:58:00 PM

Loved this, didn't get the form at first and then read the comments and saw! You made this flow so well!! Hugs!

Sandra Haight

Date: 12/7/2016 6:00:00 PM

Wow, Alexis, what a wonderfully written tender love poem in the ABC form that is also a Monorhyme! Best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/7/2016 7:19:00 PM

Hi Sandra, It's nice to see you. Thanks for such a wonderful comment. It wasn't easy doing both forms. However, I was happy with the end result.I appreciate that you stopped by:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/7/2016 1:56:00 PM

- Much mental activity in an ABC poems, you have done a wonderful work Alexis - I hope and believe it will get a top placement on the winning list, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/7/2016 1:54:00 PM

This is very well written with this form! Nice one Alexis :) Good luck in the contest.

Chris Green

Date: 12/7/2016 12:48:00 PM

So alphabetically beautiful Alexis. I think this may be one of the best of your I have ever read, though that is hard to say since all of your work amazes me, but this one, the form is so cool and the message is love...so you know that grabs me. :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/7/2016 12:18:00 PM

Wonderful poem, Alexis. Very good rhyme meter. It had me bouncing in my seat. I think you meant ... out of the box. Anywho, a fabulous poem, it's top notch. Should place well in the contest. It's an outstanding write. Love and peace to you.

Alexis Y.
Date: 12/7/2016 12:23:00 PM

Hey Freddie, I did mean "out of" the box. It had you bouncing in your seat? Mission accomplished lol! I appreciate your continued support my friend:-) Alexis