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This Fear

LORD! We will be blessed with a heaven, Where fountains of milk and honey will run! Where no pain and tears will darken! Where on desire, everything will be won! Only around pleasure and beauty, but fear none! Forever on, will dwell there immortally, yes unforgotten! O Lord, but, I should adore this framed heaven, These captive minds overlook a blessing; it’s a notion, Ah this another life will free the soul from this dreading ocean, Where Fright of loss of a beloved won’t haunt me like a demon, Where night won’t terrorize my soul of any misfortune, Oh yes there would my soul rest with no fear frozen, Will wear a smile when this disquieting concern will be abandon, I say only this peace of heaven will make my heaven …heaven

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Date: 8/31/2014 2:48:00 AM
I say only this peace of heaven will make my heaven This last line takes away my heart to the shallow darkest springs where peace and serenity dwells. welldone, You are borne poet Hina, not man made, I can do anything for this last line if you endow me....So enchanting and superb.
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/31/2014 10:58:00 AM
SO pleased that you liked it .. ...really ..made my day ! thanks alot !!! i lost my two family members ... after going through that terrible time .. now i know why ..HE gave Adam life on earth as punishment ... its literally a punishment .. a so beautiful life ! but with this fear ... that when i wrote ...after their losing them ..once again ..thanku so much ...your words really please me ! ;-)
Date: 8/23/2014 3:26:00 PM
Nice indeed and full of faith...
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Hina Nasir
Date: 8/23/2014 3:35:00 PM
lol ..yes! thanks for the comment ...really pleased :-)

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