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Thirty Rhymes, Triple Time

"Thirty Rhymes, Triple Time" by: Eric L. Boddie I'm here for so much more than just lore From the core, what we adore defines our chore So I implore individuals to soar beyond open doors Bypass the store, also the shore, even the gore Pimps have whores, lions have roars, skin has pores Rich equals poor, two squared, four, cuts leave sores The groundhog bores, the shooter scores, the pitcher pours Houses have floors, the seeker explores, prior comes before Hunters seek moor, comedians use dor, fool equals boor Boats use oars, evil, neither nor, God....no war

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Date: 12/14/2015 8:22:00 AM
A very clever piece with cleverly sustained '...ore' rhyming. '...pimps have whores, lions have roars, skin has pores,' a fabulous piece! Best wishes, Keith
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/14/2015 8:23:00 AM
...clearly a 7!
Date: 12/4/2015 8:57:00 AM
WoW! Eric, I don't know how I missed this well written piece.It has a nice flow. This is a "rhyme time" masterpiece:-) Alexis 7
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Eric Boddie
Date: 12/4/2015 9:10:00 AM
thank you alexis....the funny thing is that I have never been truly satisfied with this one....for whatever reason it just needs something but I cant change it though....gotta keep moving forward....;)
Date: 12/3/2015 4:44:00 PM
Very clever fill in rhymes to go...~~X~~
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Eric Boddie
Date: 12/3/2015 9:55:00 PM
I did ignore those who tore my last encore....lol....I am glad you like it kim....I like your style....its so very unique....individualized....that's what I try to be....like odb there's no father to my style....lol
Date: 12/1/2015 7:47:00 PM
Eric, I like the line "so I implore individuals to soar beyond open doors " ~
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Eric Boddie
Date: 12/3/2015 9:50:00 PM
thank you bw....as a fan of you I really appreciate it....;)
Date: 11/24/2015 10:10:00 AM
Hunters seek moor, comedians use dor, fool equals boor Boats use oars, evil, neither nor, God....no war,,make every sense loving your writing eric
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Eric Boddie
Date: 12/3/2015 9:48:00 PM
I Live for the mental challenge....lol....but thank you so much misha....;)
Date: 11/20/2015 2:32:00 PM
Soso... true, Eric, pass and ignore all the gore and wars.
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Eric Boddie
Date: 12/3/2015 9:43:00 PM
we really need too eve....but the media wont allow it....but thank you as always....;)

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