Thirty Pieces Part of the Change

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political terrorists have advanced in government circles

communists tampering with justice and logic

pushing unholy agendas against a backdrop of people

certain fields are soaked in blood

Partisans has now entered politics fighting secretly against an occupying force supporting the rights to kill Holy Innocence blood of our martyrs is on your hands Prejudiced in favour of a particular cause carving death as their poster child speaks volumes manipulating gossip overlooking facts that's no lie These public figures are an out and out disgrace they should be ashamed of themselves serving the master of deceit when the truth comes to light let us face it I hate to tell you that I told you so the guerilla fighter helps spill innocent blood

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 1/7/2020 6:14:00 PM

Hi Liam!:)) Excellent poem you've written ,my dearest friend Liam. Wow!Very beautifully penned!Awesome!:)What's new, ah?We're living in very ungodly, evil,corrupted,sad times Liam!But with our Lord Jesus we can have Love Hope Light Salvation!So lets pray more for all, especially all the blind,lost,very evil souls of this world!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A fav !You have a beautiful heart!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle n' sweet.I really hope n' pray a lot that you n' your very dear family are OK in all, Liam.Remember that the Lords always with you!Wishing you always all the very best in everything you do, n' please take very good care of yourself,okay, Liam!:) Please keep positive n’ very strong!Always keeping you in my heart, thoughts n' prayers!Keep your faith in Jesus!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^