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Thirty Coins

I felt the ghost of your kiss along my cheek, behind you I heard coins drop, counted; one to thirty. My eyes widened as you slunk the knife into my back. Your kiss bit into my lips, a taste of betrayal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/28/2010 6:48:00 PM
I'm with Paula on this one Madison...could say it no better unique composition.
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Date: 9/28/2010 5:49:00 AM
really enjoyed this. great title and subject and handled in a really creative manner
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Date: 9/26/2010 4:38:00 PM
wow, very powerful poem. I like THIS little poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:56:00 PM
Must have been devastating. I can't imagine the torment He felt.
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Date: 9/25/2010 7:42:00 PM
Thirty pieces of silver did it. Very nice poem...Love Scarlett
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