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Thirty

As thin as water Swimming in the rampant blood clots of ice Lumps and warts, primordial abomination in an absinthe glass Down in one and down with thirty. Those filthy hands The snail paths which ooze from each digit. To touch. To touch. Saccharine words wrapped up in sugar trails Never close enough to the real thing to be mistaken We are not quite short-sighted enough to blend the blurs of Little hands; dirty bloody hands. Wash the clinging stench off But filth will linger for an eternity under fingernails, under piers and prominade pretences The world in a box for that one woman. A soul; a crucifix of thirty, a fine daisy Chain of woven skins and notches, bite marks. Those apple love hearts Miniscule in comparison. O, Greek god! The chorus calls The angry Nazi blue, Prussia in droplets; those ink-wells of sulphur Brilliant blonde, magnificence in porcelein. Brainwaves thin as water Those little demons; Succubus, Siren! Lillith? Dragging at your closet walls You whore. _ This poem earned an Honourable Mention in the member contest "Something Wicked This Way Comes" housed here at the soup and hosted by Deborah Guzzi. :)

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Date: 5/14/2009 3:46:00 PM
Some great phrases in this write. conrats on your success in the contest. BG
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Date: 5/14/2009 1:28:00 PM
Dear Nathaniel,Congratulations on YOUR Well Deserved Honorable Mention in Deborah's "Wickedness" Contest ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 5/14/2009 10:46:00 AM
Congratulatins on placing in Deborah's poem. W-I-C-K-E-D Love, Dane
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Date: 5/14/2009 6:40:00 AM
Congratulations on the HM it is very well deserved. Amazing imagery in this one very passionate throughout. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 5/13/2009 6:58:00 PM
Congrats with you HM Nathaniel...Raul
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Date: 5/13/2009 4:29:00 PM
Congrats on your win in Debbie's contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 4/16/2009 2:02:00 PM
OH MY ...goodness...what does the thirty denote....in your mind is there only virgin mother whore....perhaps your wrath should be saved for the societies which allow only these roles?....as a verse it has most excellent qualities as feelings to live with the boil has been set to lance. Light & Love
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Date: 4/14/2009 8:32:00 AM
Brilliant poetry, Nathaniel! Like the way you describe words that cannot be mistaken for real because they are "wrapped up in sugar trails." I feel as if I have been taken on the embryonic journey of an evil woman. Very compelling! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2009 8:22:00 AM
What rich torrent of imagery, a pure gushing of passion, a fantastic retelling of mortal corrupt history ... what an awesome write.
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